Hi there Amy ! Lovely to see you this morning at our class-zoom-meet, and I especially loved you reading your writing to us - that takes a lot of courage! What a wonderful story it was too ... lots and lots of detail and you used plenty of "wow" words to describe what happened to you. Top marks to you too for remembering to use full-stops and starting each new sentence with a capital letter, which is sometimes hard to remember. I did see some "sneaky" capitals inside your words, but I can't wait to read your next writing ... keep up the wonderful mahi !!!
Hi there Amy ! Lovely to see you this morning at our class-zoom-meet, and I especially loved you reading your writing to us - that takes a lot of courage! What a wonderful story it was too ... lots and lots of detail and you used plenty of "wow" words to describe what happened to you. Top marks to you too for remembering to use full-stops and starting each new sentence with a capital letter, which is sometimes hard to remember. I did see some "sneaky" capitals inside your words, but I can't wait to read your next writing ... keep up the wonderful mahi !!!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Amy, Lovely finger spaces between each word as well.
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