Ooops, something happened to my comment to you Amy ... I will try to remember what I wrote ... This is a great piece of writing Amy ... firstly you told us WHY Peach was your favourite crayon ... then you told us about Peach's PROBLEM ... then you found a SOLUTION !! I did love the happy ending too. Your writing is going from strength to strength and I can't wait to read your next piece of writing. Keep up the wonderful mahi !
Ooops, something happened to my comment to you Amy ... I will try to remember what I wrote ...
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece of writing Amy ... firstly you told us WHY Peach was your favourite crayon ... then you told us about Peach's PROBLEM ... then you found a SOLUTION !! I did love the happy ending too. Your writing is going from strength to strength and I can't wait to read your next piece of writing. Keep up the wonderful mahi !
Amy Great job doing lots of writing so neat and nicely spaced out words.
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