This story made me laugh Rose. I have a very loud brother too! Great use of exclamation mark at the end of your writing. I can see that you practised saying your sentence before you wrote it, that you had a plan and that you wrote down the sounds you can hear in the words. Keep it up! I can see that you are thinking carefully about when to use capital letters (at the start of a sentence).
This story made me laugh Rose. I have a very loud brother too! Great use of exclamation mark at the end of your writing. I can see that you practised saying your sentence before you wrote it, that you had a plan and that you wrote down the sounds you can hear in the words. Keep it up! I can see that you are thinking carefully about when to use capital letters (at the start of a sentence).
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