It was good to see your mahi Oakley. I've never heard of a UniMonster but i can see why he/she is your favourite toy. Does it have a name and what is so special about it ? I loved how you used a contraction in your writing, eg, it's (do you know what it is short for ?). Perhaps you can find other contractions that you could use in your future writing, eg., don't (short for do not), haven't (short for have not). See how you go ... Whaea Tanya
It was good to see your mahi Oakley. I've never heard of a UniMonster but i can see why he/she is your favourite toy. Does it have a name and what is so special about it ? I loved how you used a contraction in your writing, eg, it's (do you know what it is short for ?). Perhaps you can find other contractions that you could use in your future writing, eg., don't (short for do not), haven't (short for have not). See how you go ...
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