Wednesday, 22 April 2020

Mckenzie's demolition writing


  1. Mckenzie what a great explanation of what you did to make your dad's new truck fit in the driveway. Thank you for taking so much care in forming your letters carefully and spelling your words correctly. Can you try using some Wow words (adjectives/ describing words) to describe your dad's new truck?

  2. I loved the "re-count" of your dad's dilemma with his truck ... it must have taken a lot of time, effort and energy to undergo such a big project. I was interested to read that the dump is open ... I have lots of stuff to take there !!

  3. That is a good job done writing about tidying up after the trees were cut. What sort of truck did dad get? colour?`